Issues with Insta - Video Summaries
Group A (flop accounts)
Raphael: https://spark.adobe.com/video/GeHV3uDccKRkl well explained, fluent, good vocab, careful: "media" is already a plural word
Lorenz: https://spark.adobe.com/video/20u8oSgXnppiU mostly fluent, decent vocab. Try to pronounce more clearly. Your video is lacking a short introduction.
Marvin: https://spark.adobe.com/video/ghC2Y6FazStmR fluent, well explained, good vocab, some grammar glitches (adverbs, uncountable nouns), careful: "th" is not pronounced "d".
Fritz: https://spark.adobe.com/video/UCmtaGZLxlhpP careful: photos are upside down, it is hard to understand you(pronunciation and German expressions).
Madeleine: https://spark.adobe.com/video/cJSmuM76Nedd7 very fluent, well explained, good idiomatic English. NICE! Are you sure, writing a full text is the most efficient way of taking notes, though?
Emy: https://spark.adobe.com/video/ww1wwkrubHc3E mostly fluent, good vocab, well explained, good pronunciation, a bit long... What happened to the last photo?
Myriam: https://spark.adobe.com/video/uOuSQUG3kA9va nice notes, some good idiomatic language, mostly fluent, well explained
Freya: https://spark.adobe.com/video/INEMqPBk9Ba91 super fluent, nice pronunciation, good language, very well explained
Group B (bullying)
Nino: https://spark.adobe.com/video/6Tk3jSvtlJsNm mostly fluent, some grammar problems (verbs!! "he, she, it"), some good vocab
Stefan: https://spark.adobe.com/video/M6LUQRfdjePol very well explained, some good language, some pronunciation problems (bullying, impact, deactivate...)
Marcel: https://spark.adobe.com/video/LOpHIQ0XCghZO Try to enounce with more confidence. It would make your video easier to understand! You explained the matter correctly, however there are some grammr issues...
Adonis: https://spark.adobe.com/video/PVkbDya0XG5b7 Some serious pronunciation issues (bullied), photos are upside down, correctly explained, mostly fluent :-)
Kati: https://spark.adobe.com/video/fXfl2gukurGCt fantastic pronunciation, well explained, some nice idiomatic language. Two tipps: Try to include more sophistcted vocab and try to ramp up your enthusiasm a little.
Lorena: http://spark.adobe.com/video/wDFsQB2s1avCqh Your link is broken.
Jule: https://spark.adobe.com/video/XMR5fNhdDZgFG Next time, try a quieter spot for recording and please have your photos the right way up. Explanation and language are quite nice, though.